Writing task 2

-  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

- There are A) 2 concept /2 questions/ essay and 3 concept /3 questions/ essay.

                  B) argumentative essay / agree, disagree/

I. Two or Three concept essay asks about:

- Effects /results, outcomes, consequence/

- Causes / reasons, factors, occasion/

- Advantages / pros, benefits, reward, vantage/

- Disadvantages / cons, drawbacks, handicap, detriment/

Topic. AIDS is a deadly disease which has harmed many lives. What are the effects of AIDS. Provide some practical solutions to solve it.

Жишээ нь энэ даалгаварт effects ба solutions асуусан байна. Тэгэхээр 2 concept /2 questions/ essay гэсэн үг.

Эхлээд маш хурдан бичих effects ба solutions гэдгээ тодорхойлоод бичдэг юм уу эсвэл толгойдоо төлөвлөнө. Жишээ нь:

Effects: 1. Death /slowly but surely die, can’t live no longer/ 2. Isolation /nobody wants to talk to you, be alone, alienated, cause depression, leads to suicidal/ 3. Financial crisis

Solution: 1. Sex education /introduce sex in school/ 2. Religious background 3. Compulsory blood check-ups/          

Үүний дараа бичиж эхэлнэ.

P1: Introduction- short 3-4 sentences / оршил хэсэгт effects ба solutions -гаа оруулахгүй өөр нэг юм, жишээ нь  causes ч юм уу бичнэ./

            It is undoubtedly true that…….

It is a well known fact that……

It goes without saying that…….

It is undeniably true that………….

/гэж байгаад бас даалгаврын гарчгийг нь жаахан өөрчлөөд бичнэ. Тэгээд араас нь асуугаагүй нэг concept бичнэ./

It is undoubtedly true that AIDS is a fatal illness which has killed millions of lives. Unfortunately, there is no cure to this horrendous sickness. Unprotected sex and needle sharing are the two obvious factors of AIDS. From my observation, there are several effects and solutions to beat AIDS.

           

P2: Effects /2-3 sentences/ одоо effect-ээ бичнэ. Харин ийм эссе-д paragraph тус бүрийн төгсгөлд conclusion бичдэг.

            To begin with……

            To start off with …..

            First and foremost…… there are 3 effects….

P3: Solutions /2-3 sentences/

            Besides that …….there are 3 feasible solutions…..

After each paragraph, write conclusions:

            In a nutshell, ……..

            To cut it short, …….

            All in all, ………

            To make a long story short, …………

            To summarize, ………..

Жишээ нь:

………………..there are 3 effects of AIDS. Death is seen as the first outcome of AIDS. The second effect is …………..

In a nutshell, these are the effects of AIDS.

………………there are 3 solutions to get rid of AIDS. Sex education is considered as one of the most powerful ways to curb AIDS.

All in all, these are solutions of AIDS.

P4: Conclusion /3 sentences хэсэгт дахиад introduction хэсгээ өөрчилж бичээд өөрийн санаа бодол буюу believe, ирээдүйд юу хүсч байгаа буюу wish-ээ бичнэ.

            - Restate thesis

            - give your opinion / I truly believe…./

            - wish in the future / I sincerely wish that…./

To conclude, theses are outcomes and methods to solve this disease. I truly believe that everyone should live healthily to avoid this awful dilemma. I sincerely wish that doctors and scientists would find cure for AIDS in the near future.

II. 2 дахь үндсэн эссены бас нэг төрөл нь “Argumentative” essay / agree, disagree/

Topic. In modern lifestyles there are many working mothers. A lot of people say women must work and earn money, it is not their work to nurture children at home.

Do you agree or disagree?

Бас эхлээд маш хурдан юутай нь санал нийлж байна, харин санал нийлэхгүй шалтгаан юу байна гэдгээ дотроо бодож төлөвлөнө. Жишээ нь:

Agree: 1. To gain independence /reliable to husband, depended to husband/ financially free 2. To help out with the finance, income will grow

Disagree: 1. To nurture children /if you work who look after them/

- Usually have 5 paragraphs. It is debatable, controversial essay. /agree or disagree/

Agree гэж бичих гэж байгаа бол эхний 2 paragraph дээр өөрийн бодлыг дэмжсэн санаагаа бичнэ. Харин хамгийн сүүлийн paragraph-д эсрэг санаагаа дурьдаад гэхдээ би бол үүний эсрэг байна гээд бичнэ. Жишээ дээр хараар бичсэн өгүүлбэрүүдийг цээжлээд дундуур нь оруулаад бичиж болно.

- Introduction: 3-4 sentences /don’t give any of your answers in the introduction/

- P1: reason №1.

            My main argument is …………..

- P2: reason №2.

            My next argument is …………..

-P3: Why people disagree-support

            However, many others would argue and disagree that women should help their spouses. They believe that women should stay at home and nurture their children instead of wasting time working. They also feel that if women work, their family might be neglected. I understand their point of view, but I can not agree with it. I still feel that women have the right to work, to have a better family.

- Conclusion- open your mind again. 2 sentences.

            In a nutshell, I understand that everything in this world has its own good or bad points. Nonetheless, I would still make a stand and agree that women ought to work and to help their spouses.